rough cut S1-23

The music for the ident should be changed, as it does not go with the thriller criteria and clashes with the rest of the clip. The camera shots were good, as there were a lot of variation such as the over the shoulder of the two victims and the point of view shot of the antagonist.

The credits right at the end seemed quite poor and rushed, and maybe you should consider spacing them out over the course of the opening. and the sound seemed a little to cheery while the credits were on.

Questionaire answers.

1. What kind of narrative do you expect to see in the thriller?
   I would expect to see arguing and fighting.
   
   
   
2. How do you expect the music to work with the editing?
   faster pace to create tension in the scenes.
   
   
   
3. How do you expect the editing to work with the thriller theme?
   fast cut editing to make the scene more intense.
   
   
   
4. How would you expect the protagonist to be portrayed?
   friendly, maybe a family person.
   
   
   
5. How do you think atmosphere would be created?
   the atmosphere would be created with fast beat music, fast cut editing and atmospheric lighting.
   
   
   
6. How do you expect mise-en-scene to relate to the thriller theme?
   the thriller theme would be related to the mise en scene with different camera angles moving around the action and lighting to create shadows to build tension also props to make it more realistic.