Analysis of feedback.

From the feedback given I can gather that we need to improve our garage band music throughout the piece for it to fit the genre better. Also the credits need to be edited to fit in during the film and not just at the end as they seem rushed and are quite plain. The picture quality of the television in the piece can't be changed as that is the best we could get with the quality of camera we were given to use. Obviously if it was a proffesional film then the quality would be much better.