Feedback from S1-22 on final cut

we thought your film was effective. the over the shoulder shot was really effective because both of you were in the shot. we thought your camera shots were steady and edited well, although there aren't many variations in shot types. We thought that the soundtrack fitted well to add suspense but we thought there should have been music at the very beginning to set the scene.

feedback from s1-22

We thought that, narrative was good and we like your variety of shots; the over the shoulder shot of the t.v was good, and the P.O.V shot was also good.
You could improve the lighting quality, by having relevant dialogue, for example when the two characters were tied up the dialogue was to colloquial and calm.

special effects were good with the television and the flashing lights. But we could not see the TV well, and the overall quality of the filming was quite poor.
You need to add more suspenseful music, because we actually laughed when we watched it because of Alex walking into the wall. With these changes made, the film could be more specific in terms of genre.