Friday 12 March 2010

rough cut S1-23

The music for the ident should be changed, as it does not go with the thriller criteria and clashes with the rest of the clip. The camera shots were good, as there were a lot of variation such as the over the shoulder of the two victims and the point of view shot of the antagonist.

The credits right at the end seemed quite poor and rushed, and maybe you should consider spacing them out over the course of the opening. and the sound seemed a little to cheery while the credits were on.

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